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I'd like to sign up for this type of pledge, but this slogan seems ill thought out. It sounds unsupportive, uncaring and trite. And surely "probably" gives the wrong message too.
I would prefer a more assertive slogan which if possible conveys a caring attitude. Whatever we do as non-believers and humanists needs to be thought through. We need to be constructive. This slogan is not the right one, though the principle of advertising this way is fine, especially if we've decided exactly why we are doing it and what we want to achieve.philip nathan, 11 years ago.